all, my comments (all page numbers refer to version D3): 1. syntax boxes 6-37 and 6-39, and corresponding syntaxes on p. 145, line 29 and on p. 147, line 55: the three consecutive left brackets ("[[[") should have a space inserted after the first, and the three consecutive right brackets ("]]]") should have a space inserted before the last. then in each, the remaining pair of consecutive brackets should be bolded. the point is that the single bracket is a meta-character showing an optional item, while the pair of brackets are part of the syntax for declaration of local variables. the correct spacing and fonts appear in syntax box 6-78. 2. p. 98: several references to "sere" (all small letters) should be "SERE" (all caps). 3. table 1 (keyword table): "mutable" is missing. 4. syntax box 6-81: "const" and "mutable" should be bold cindy. Sitvanit Ruah/Haifa/IBM@IB MIL To Sent by: ieee-1850@eda.org owner-ieee-1850@e cc da.org Subject [$ieee-1850] Draft D3 uploaded 26/07/2009 08:49 Hi all, Draft D3 was uploaded to http://www.eda-stds.org/ieee-1850/docs/P1850-D3-2009.pdf (same password). The draft incorporates comments received from Dana and Lyes and several additional small editorial changes. Regards, Sitvanit Sitvanit Ruah Formal Verification Group IBM Haifa Research Laboratory Tel: 972-4-828-1249 -- This message has been scanned for viruses and dangerous content by MailScanner, and is believed to be clean. -- This message has been scanned for viruses and dangerous content by MailScanner, and is believed to be clean.Received on Sun Jul 26 03:39:49 2009
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