Re: Comments on Version 2.3 draft 3

From: Geoffrey.Coram <geoffrey.coram_at_.....>
Date: Fri Mar 28 2008 - 09:36:34 PDT
Page 152 (169 of PDF): the contribution statement still says
   V(anet) <+ var;

where all other "var" instances were changed to "AnalogVar"


Page 188 (205 of PDF): "will schedule it’s wake-up"
s/it's/its

This appears a second time in the same paragraph; it might
be worth a global search for "it's" to make sure the contraction
is wanted, else replace with the possessive.


Page 190 (207 of PDF): ddiscreteo; looks like a space is needed,
may just be a font kerning problem.


Page 220 (237 of PDF): we need to remove the non-variable
options for the seed argument for consistency with 1364.
I'd go ahead and remove the type_string, also, and make this
just a copy of the 1364 function.

The AMS-only $rdist functions can keep their type_string
and integer_parameter_identifier.

-Geoffrey

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