Hi,
I know we already ratified the P&P, but still I would like to suggest a
rewriting of the second sentence of section 6:
"The Chair and Vice-Chair shall be IEEE members of any grade, individual
IEEE-SA members, and must also be a Designated Representative (DR) of an
entity that is a corporate IEEE-SA member."
There is a strange shift from the plural into the singular at the second
comma, and also I don't think it is made fully clear that the officers
must both be individual IEEE members and in addition to that individual
IEEE-SA members (if indeed that is what is meant). So I suggest either
of the following wordings:
"The Chair and Vice-Chair shall be IEEE members of any grade, and also
individual IEEE-SA members, and must also be Designated Representatives
(DR) of some entity that is a corporate IEEE-SA member."
or
"The Chair and Vice-Chair shall be an IEEE member of any grade, and
also an individual IEEE-SA member, and must also be a Designated
Representative (DR) of an entity that is a corporate IEEE-SA member."
Best Regards, Johan M
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