Subject: [sv-cc] Feedback on revision 0.7 Section 1 - Direct Programming Interface (DPI)
From: Stickley, John (john_stickley@mentorg.com)
Date: Wed Mar 26 2003 - 13:49:14 PST
Joao,
Here's some minor feedback - mainly typo's for Section 1.
I'll follow with more for the other sections later.
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1.1.1 Functions = 1st sentence
"DPI allows direct function inter-language ..."
Take out "function" here.
At the end of the sentence "languages either side of"
should be "languages on either side of"
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1.1.1 Functions = 3rd paragraph
Middle of paragraph there's a reference to "external function"
should be "imported function"
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1.1.1 Functions = 4th paragraph, 4th sentence
"Calls sites ..." should be "Call sites ...".
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1.1.2 Data Types= 1st paragraph, 2nd to last sentence
"With with ..." take out one of them.
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1.2 Two layers of the DPI interface
Take out "interface" - redundant
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1.4.1 Required properties ... - end of 3rd sentence
"are specified. for an imported"
Take out '.'.
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1.4.3 Context functions
A number of references to "external functions"
that should be changed to "imported functions".
Search and replace all instances in this section.
That's it for now. More feedback coming ...
-- johnS
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