[sv-cc] Re: DPI Exported Task: suggested corrections

Subject: [sv-cc] Re: DPI Exported Task: suggested corrections
From: Swapnajit Mittra (mittra@juno.com)
Date: Fri Dec 19 2003 - 14:44:02 PST

David, please accept these as official sv-cc comments.
Thanks Ralph for doing this in such short notice. 

--
Swapnajit Mittra
Project VeriPage ::: http://www.angelfire.com/ca/verilog

-- "Duncan, Ralph" <ralph_duncan@mentorg.com> wrote:
Gentlemen,

Despite the enormous number of changes, there seem to be 
relatively few typos.  I suggest the following corrections.

Ralph
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27.2.2
Re: the changed reference to "Annex A" to "Annex D": does the
subsequent change to "Annex E" happen now, or in the future?

27.4.1
.Para 1, sentence 2 <verb agreement>
..change "are required for an imported tasks..."
..to     "are required for an imported task..."

A.2.6 
. grammar production typo: grammar nonterminal on left-hand-side:
..change "pi_import_export"
.. to "dpi_import_export"

A.2.6 
. Cannot find changes to footnote 'a', which, presumably,
  would now appear as footnote 11 (since footnote 'b' matches 12).

A.27.7: appearance of old chapter number
.para 2, sent 1: "section 26.6"; should this be 27.6 now?
.para 4, sent 2: "section 26.4.3" -- now be 27.4.3?
.para 6, sent 2: "section 26.8" -- now be 27.8?

A.27.7: grammatical pedantry
.Para 3; sentence 2
..change "This semantic is identical..."
..to "These semantics are identical..."
Singular form, 'semantic' is an adjective and can't be a subject. Plural
form 'semantics' is noun that can take a single or a plural verb form. 
 
D.5

.Paragraph 4, sent. 1: sub/verb agreement
..change "every imported tasks"
..to "every imported task"

.Para 4, sent. 3: task-number (2) and need 'or', not 'and'
..change "in the exported tasks or function's...and the exported tasks and
function's"
..to "in the exported task or function's...and the exported task or
function's"

.Para 5, sent. 2:
..change "tasks or function types"
..to "task or function types"

D.5.5

.Para 1, sentence 1:
..change "Some imported DPI task and functions or other interface task and
functions
  called from them require.." to more comprehensible
.. "Some imported DPI tasks or functions, or other DPI interface tasks or
functions
  called from them, require..." <note commas to help keep the 3 ors
straight>.

.Para 3, sentence 1:
..change "a non-context imported task and function call"
..to "a non-context imported task or function call"

.Para 4, sentence 1:
..change "only those task and functions can"
.. to "only those tasks and functions can"

D.7.2
.Para 1, sentence 3:
..change "A task and function exported"
..to "A task or function exported"

D.8.1 
.Para 2, sent. 1
..change "functlions" [excellent coinage]
..to "functions"

.Para 5, last sent.
..change "All export tasks and function calls"
..to "All export task and function calls"

<Hope this helps> 

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