Stu- [ SV-CC members please look this over- especially (3) with "Rationale" notes. Thanks in advance. ] Below are my corrections found from reviewing Section 36 (VPI Data Model) of P1800/D3. FYI- I saw that D3a has just come out, but I assume from your latest email that this section was not affected. ---------------------------------------------------------------- 1) Bottom of section 36.3.3 "Diagram key for traversing relationships", a minor text correction (grammatical) in the last sentence: "See 36.2 for more details on VPI access constant names" Should be: "See 36.2 for more details on VPI access to constant names" ^^ 2) In section 36.16 "Variables", detail 26 (p. 828), the last reference in the text reads: "(see 8.26" // no closing paren Should be: "(see 8.27)" 3) In section 36.25 "Class definition", detail 5, the phrase: "(refer to 8.16 and 8.23)" Should be: "(refer to 8.16 and 8.24)" [ Rationale: 8.23 is "Out-of-block" declarations for class methods vs. 8.24 which is "Parameterized Classes"; it is assumed this is what the detail text means by iterations on param assigns. ] 4) In section 36.35, detail 1, the reference: "(see 17.8)" Should be: "(see 17.7)" -- This message has been scanned for viruses and dangerous content by MailScanner, and is believed to be clean.Received on Thu Jun 14 14:00:16 2007
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