[sv-cc] Review of P1800/D3 Section 36 (VPI Data Model)

From: Chuck Berking <berking_at_.....>
Date: Thu Jun 14 2007 - 13:59:50 PDT
Stu-
[ SV-CC members please look this over- especially (3) with "Rationale"
  notes. Thanks in advance. ]

Below are my corrections found from reviewing Section 36 (VPI Data
Model) of P1800/D3.  FYI- I saw that D3a has just come out, but I
assume from your latest email that this section was not affected.

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1) Bottom of section 36.3.3 "Diagram key for traversing relationships",
   a minor text correction (grammatical) in the last sentence:

    "See 36.2 for more details on VPI access constant names"

   Should be:

    "See 36.2 for more details on VPI access to constant names"
                                             ^^

2) In section 36.16 "Variables", detail 26 (p. 828), the last reference
   in the text reads:

        "(see 8.26"    // no closing paren

   Should be:

        "(see 8.27)"

3) In section 36.25 "Class definition", detail 5, the phrase:

        "(refer to 8.16 and 8.23)"

   Should be:

        "(refer to 8.16 and 8.24)"

   [ Rationale: 8.23 is "Out-of-block" declarations for class methods
vs.
     8.24 which is "Parameterized Classes"; it is assumed this is what
the
     detail text means by iterations on param assigns. ]
 
4) In section 36.35, detail 1, the reference:

        "(see 17.8)"

   Should be:

        "(see 17.7)"

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