Re: [sv-cc] Slides for SV-CC presentation at DVCon Meeting, Draft 2

Chas, two suggestions:

1) Extend the last sentence of the notes for Slide 2 to read

"This was done for VHPI using the XMI (XML Metadata Interchange)
format."

Some of your audience may be more comfortable with
the idea of using a specialization of the XML format.

2) In Slide 5, instead of "Making objects which" use
"Making object names which". I would also further indent
the next three subbullets under this one, since they list
three types of objects with implementation-dependent names.

Regards,
Jim Vellenga

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Charlie Dawson wrote:
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> Here is the draft with the feedback from our meeting today.
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> -Chas
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