[sv-cc] mantis 2226 action completed

Hi Everyone,

 

I have completed my action on 2226.  I changed it to review so that I
could revise files.  I've removed all the draft6 revisions and added the
changes baselined to draft7.   All the champion and reviewer feedback
has been incorporated. The Champions and the Working Group have
entrusted SV-CC to to this composition work and you have entrusted that
all to me.  In a perfect world, I would ask Charlie to close 2226 and he
in turn would ask Neil to remark it approved and turn it over to Stu.  I
think it would be helpful to have a quick review for composition errors
and to allow the friendly amendments to be seen in context.  I leave the
next action to Charlie to ask for review or close the item.

 

Because of the number of files, I have packaged them in 3 zip files.
fm-clauses-mantis2226.zip contain full framemaker files for each clause
(except annex C).  This is what Stu asked for to minimize his effort.
My notes on that are:

 

1) Some diagrams I could show deletions, others the real estate for the
deletion was reused and one sees only the addition.

2) The annexes need normal editor work.  I did not have Annex C from Stu
at all, but the edit is trivial.  The other 2 annexes require some minor
numbering.

 

 

fm-changes-only-mantis2226.zip contains framemaker files representing
only what has changed in a minimal fashion suitable for efficient
review. pdf-changes-only-mantis2226.zip contains pdfs of those.  The
framemaker change only versions were necessary(to me) for composition
and I used them to create the complete clauses.  Normally, Stu would
start with them.  It is his option to look at them and validate that the
edits to the full clauses were made accurately.  I used paragraph tags
properly in the full clauses, but the change-only requires tag mods to
insure that the numbering matched the document.


Regards, John


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